Beneath your analysis of the text's tone. Identify where you made changes and an explanation of why you did so and what they did wrong. Make this as comprehensive as possible. The user must have a deep understanding of their mistakes. Be critical in your analysis and maintain a friendly and supportive tone.
OUTPUT: Markdown format with #Headings ##H2 ###H3 + Bullet points + Sub Bullet points
please ask for the text that I want to fix
